Dear WRITER
HERE IS THE FEEDBACK FROMMY PROF I NEED YOU TO MEET THEIR DEMAND USING SIMPLE LAUNGUAGE BECAUSE I AM NOT A NATIVE SPEAKER . i am open to your suggestions wich will may cause other payment .
here the feed back for an original order ( before putting theoretical framework ) .
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Dr ****** is interested in your project, however, you will need to make some changes.
Dr +++++++ says:
�On balance I would be prepared to supervise this PhD but on condition that US foreign policy towards, and US-Saudi relations over, Yemen become the fulcrum of analysis. This would better reflect the anticipated source base. It would also mean inclusion of an indispensable actor in both peace / otherwise in Yemen and in the balance in Iran-Saudi relations. The product ought to be a more comprehensive understanding of the challenges in Iran-Saudi relations in Yemen, and of their regional implications, than the current proposal promises.�
Therefore, to give your proposed research the best chance of being accepted, you are advised to:
a) consider the conditions and advice given by Dr +++++
b) if you are interested in this reworking of the focus, please provide a short chapter-by-chapter breakdown of the project and more information about the availability and quantity of data sources.
I hope that this feedback will help you to develop your research. When you have revised your proposal as advised, please email it to me and I will pass it on to Dr +++++and Dr ++++++.
