What’s being sent to you is an article summary that includes a section of personal opinion. What you have to do is rewrite the whole paper in a way that will organize all the main points and ideas, make the paper more clear and concise, and make everything flow well. In order to do that, you must read the article to have the information to base yourself on to rewrite the paper.

Make sure the paper follows these instructions as you rewrite:

Summary should identify the purpose of the article, the main points used to support the author’s ideas and point out what makes the issue chosen a social problem. Make sure the title of the summary reflects the article’s content and that a link to its online source is included at the end of the text.

Include a section of analysis/personal opinion directly following the summary of the article. For example, you may explain your opinion on the role of the various stakeholders (government, communities, individuals, etc.), discuss roadblocks to solving this issue, any solutions that seem possible, or ask any questions that seem pertinent.

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Here is the article: http://www.nytimes.com/2013/08/10/business/global/in-germany-little-appetite-to-change-troubled-banking-system.html?pagewanted=2&_r=0