For this instructor draft paper, you are going to revise your analysis of Rosin’s “the Overprotected Kid.” Be sure that you have a clear thesis that addresses either audience or genre and forecasts your entire paper. Also make sure that your topic sentences refer back to the thesis and that you have substantial quotes, examples, and references from “The Overprotected Kid” and cite in APA format. This paper must be in Times New Roman, 12 pt font, and be double spaced.

This revised draft should be 3 pages.

Outcomes:
Produce effective written communication appropriate to a variety of contexts (Gen Ed 3)
Use the writing process as a means of discovering and presenting ideas
Demonstrate proficiency in various expository modes of academic writing (Gen Ed 3)
Craft thesis-driven and well-organized prose
Employ revising and editing strategies as essential elements of the writing process
Produce writing that is generally free of grammatical and mechanical errors
Research, critically read, and synthesize a variety of sources to produce a documented research paper (Gen Ed 2; Gen Ed 5)