please

make sure to correct all numbers to show the correct decimals;
rewrite document and take out finance mistakes such as depreciation (page 18);
create pessimistic view (different scenarios);
give further details on where the numbers are coming from i.e. origin of sales, how you got to the numbers (Statistics, interview, etc.).

please I couldn’t chat with you anymore in the original order, can we find a solution for you to correct this? I was not planning to pay again.