I previously worked with a writer and just need to finish up a few details for my essay “exploring monstrous imagery”. The questions are as follows:
What is your topic? 
What is your working thesis statement?

Please review your rough draft.  Then answer the following questions.  Focus on CONTENT, not grammar and language issues.

1)Is my topic well-enough focused to be developed with specific detail and discussion?  If not, how could I improve the focus?
2)Is the thesis clearly stated at either 1) the end of the introduction or 2) the beginning of the conclusion?
3)Does each body paragraph have a clear topic sentence that supports the thesis?
4)Does each body paragraph include some personal observations or examples to illustrate my point?
5)Does each body paragraph include some discussion that explains the examples or shows their importance?
6)Does the conclusion discuss the overall significance of the topic?
In a paragraph describe how you plan to revise the content (focus, organization, development) of your draft to improve your paper?