This essay is based on Steve Jobs commencement speech at Stanford University in 2005.
It should be organized around his three messages, for which he gives his own life examples. Each of the three messages should be the topic of each of the three body paragraphs,
You can use examples from your own life and experiences and/or Jobs specific examples.
Title MLA Style (not Steve Jobs!)
Introduction with a perfect thesis statement
three body paragraphs, each with a topic sentence and specific examples (can be your own specific examples too)
a conclusion

at least two semicolons used correctly
no Run-ons, commas splices, or sentence fragments
Proof read at least 2x
this could use more specific details in your  examples–for example, a specific situation where something occurred
Proof read for options 1-5